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Planet's Alignment

Planet's Alignment

Photography Photography \ Self Portrait Contest | 11/26/07 @216 | DaRkViXxXeN | Comments critiques (17) | Views views (447)


Planet's Alignment
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Everybody... this is me. A spontaneous Self-portrait I did while my friend's metal band were recording their first album. The title is about the hard moment that my life was going through at that time, when all things seemed to be changing, some for bad, some for good.
 
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Avatar Vasco

 11/26/07 @550

For a spontaneous self portrait it's very nice. I would however change a few things. I'd remove the backpack on the left, this way it would be more "private" more just you. There are also some darker areas, but I'm not going to say much about it because it probably my screen!
I Liked it!
 
Avatar androx3k

 11/26/07 @557

I agree with Vasco and I would like to add that probably you can try also with some light candle illumination
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 11/26/07 @602

Nice perspective angle!
agree about the backpack comment :)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 11/26/07 @626

Glad to see another one from you.
Very nice lighting and mood!.....I would crop the ornament at the top.
Carlos
 
Avatar moserArtist

 11/26/07 @663

Nice portait!

Would plan the composition a little more.

Think of things that don't have to be there and it will be more focus on you and your person instead of distractions around you! :)
 
Avatar twistoflime

 11/26/07 @689

Nice perspective. Overall the image seems dark and jumbled. My eye keeps going to the empty area in the upper right.
 
Avatar Lenn0

 11/26/07 @749

nice portrait! very nice happy mood!
 
Avatar Traff

 11/26/07 @907

Does suffer from feeling a bit busy, but inclusion of the rucksack i'd suggest places the person in context, provides some background to her situation and can be more expressive than a purely sterile studio shot.
Could possibly benefit from a tighter crop, the space at the top is perhaps surplus, and off centering the person may help 'declutter ' the image without actually losing any 'story telling' elements.
Dramatic lighting - may work well in b/w(?)
 
Avatar Jafus

 11/26/07 @923

Gr8 lighting& perspective:)
 
Avatar DaRkViXxXeN

 11/26/07 @945

Traff.. that's what I meant when I said that was spontaneous, and all the few things around me are a part of the history that title reflects. The backpack always comes with me and it's a part of me . Thank you all for comment!!!!.
 
Avatar Daykan

 11/26/07 @967

Great perspective!! And you´re really pretty!! ;)
Ya podríamos arreglar para ir a algún lado, no??? Muy buen trabajo!!!
 
Avatar RvascoF

 11/27/07 @826

Nice lighting, the backpack shouldn´t be there, i would crop some of the top....!!!
Good to see more southamerican people arround...!!!(thumbup)
Linda foto, una toma más cercana sería mejor....!!!!
Daykan al ataque.......................!!!!!!!
Regards, Ruben....!!!
 
Avatar Daykan

 11/27/07 @978

quote:

Daykan al ataque.......................!!!!!!!
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Es un ataque sorpresa!! ;)
 
Avatar DaRkViXxXeN

 11/28/07 @204

jajajajajaja....
 
Avatar Abstractor

 12/08/07 @090

Hi my dear friend :)
So good to see a photo of you!
You are just beautiful.
I love your smile, and the look in your eyes. The lighting is good. Really great to see you.

K
 
Avatar soheil

 12/15/07 @831

are there lot of metal bonds in argentina ?
nice shot... +10 :)
 
Avatar ARTYESTILO

 12/16/07 @261

Very nice... good photo :)
beautiful model ;)
 
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   DaRkViXxXeN
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  Paula Kaus
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  05/30/1985 (23)
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