For a spontaneous self portrait it's very nice. I would however change a few things. I'd remove the backpack on the left, this way it would be more "private" more just you. There are also some darker areas, but I'm not going to say much about it because it probably my screen!
I Liked it!

I agree with Vasco and I would like to add that probably you can try also with some light candle illumination

Nice perspective angle!
agree about the backpack comment

Glad to see another one from you.
Very nice lighting and mood!.....I would crop the ornament at the top.
Carlos

Nice portait!

Would plan the composition a little more.

Think of things that don't have to be there and it will be more focus on you and your person instead of distractions around you!

Nice perspective. Overall the image seems dark and jumbled. My eye keeps going to the empty area in the upper right.

nice portrait! very nice happy mood!

Does suffer from feeling a bit busy, but inclusion of the rucksack i'd suggest places the person in context, provides some background to her situation and can be more expressive than a purely sterile studio shot.
Could possibly benefit from a tighter crop, the space at the top is perhaps surplus, and off centering the person may help 'declutter ' the image without actually losing any 'story telling' elements.
Dramatic lighting - may work well in b/w(?)

Gr8 lighting& perspective

Traff.. that's what I meant when I said that was spontaneous, and all the few things around me are a part of the history that title reflects. The backpack always comes with me and it's a part of me . Thank you all for comment!!!!.

Great perspective!! And you´re really pretty!!
Ya podríamos arreglar para ir a algún lado, no??? Muy buen trabajo!!!

Nice lighting, the backpack shouldn´t be there, i would crop some of the top....!!!
Good to see more southamerican people arround...!!!
Linda foto, una toma más cercana sería mejor....!!!!
Daykan al ataque.......................!!!!!!!
Regards, Ruben....!!!

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Daykan al ataque.......................!!!!!!!

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Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Es un ataque sorpresa!!

jajajajajaja....

Hi my dear friend
So good to see a photo of you!
You are just beautiful.
I love your smile, and the look in your eyes. The lighting is good. Really great to see you.

K

are there lot of metal bonds in argentina ?
nice shot... +10

Very nice... good photo
beautiful model